Altering illustrations for PROJECT 2 - creating more

Altering illustrations for PROJECT 2 - creating more

Undated

- more realistic than my last illustration, however, I am not fond of the face

- despite the face looking more childlike, there is something off about it that does not capture what the child may be going through 

- it also does not seem funny to me - I know it does not have to be, but I want it to match my usual art style

- I like the dog in the background as it makes you wonder what is goign to happen next

- having the bow on the bike works well as it shows the audience that it is a girl's bike

- definitely would look better with colour but I can experiment with this at a later date

- definitely prefer this piece - it is more my style

- the scuffs on the knees fit well to the story

- I also like the small twigs that are in the hair - it is a nice touch

- the facial expression reflects how the child is feeling but since it is in a style, it is more funny

- decided to bring back the face of the mannequin from my old illustration

- I felt like the last illustration (faceless mannequin) was just not me, it did not suit my style and felt like I was holding back on what I would usually do

- due to this being a competition, I would rather submit a piece that is my style, what I would normally do etc rather than submit a piece that feels like it lacks creativity - I would rather do that and not win so I am true to myself and work

- I added additional text from the two young girls which further narrates the story in a funny way

- I like how the dad is pointing - it all fits together very well

- the perspective is also interesting!

- not really altered this illustration, think it is great the way it is! 

- very happy to submit this

- had new stories sent to us, this one caught my attention

- I love the facial expression as the character seems scared and nervous (also embarassed!) as this fits well with how the protagonist feels

- made sure to add little key elements such as the joggers being on the flag (mentioned in the story) as well as the logo on the podium saying 'president of lost and found'

- having him thank his Mum links in well with the story and is a common thing to say when winning an award so this worked really well!

- this is very different to the previous illustrations, it has a different vibe and feel to it

- this is not a bad thing though as it shows the different styles that I can do!

- I think it captures the scare factor of the police that the child in the story feels, I think this works really well and lets the audience in

- really enjoyed drawing this, really enjoyed the different patterns and exploring how to creatively turn a police car scary

- despite the child being scared of the police, I focused on the police car because it is a different approach - the story also mentioned police cars at the very beginning so I felt like it was appropriate to start from there to